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by DoctorYnot

person anononon bae Don lie
schedule November 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ok the part where luna just poured down that alcohol on linclons head and just straight up licked it is just why of and hot. and finally at the where she goes back to Lincoln room with another bottle my reaction was ''oh not again''. but anyways great story pal I can't wait for the next chapter.
person FilthyFrank
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
not my proudest fap but I'll take it. nice story dude.
person thinking_rectangular
schedule October 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I want to feel bad for Luna but I cant ;-;

person ass licked
schedule October 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh man sweet Jesus how the fuck does linclon get fucked so easily, I mean if I were him I would have shot them all down. But that a side, nice story dude.
person RandomReviewer
schedule October 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Here is my brief review of my experience with 'Make It Wit Chu': Despair, but also a boner. Very good story! I assume Luan is next? I can't wait to see how she handles this situation!

schedule October 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Sweet Jesus, this is madness. I was so giddy seeing this new chapter up; maybe Luna'll understand, I mean, in the back of my mind I knew it couldn't be true, but maybe. Then he told her, and I was like "yes nigga, serve the justice." but bam, back into the darkness we go.

 

This dude is going full Clarissa, except on a much wider scale. These three chapters have hurt the shit outta me, shit is soul crushing. Barbaric, some next level sad shit.....

 

I happily await your new chapters

person Nina bullocks
schedule October 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
God this was just dark too read but at the same time interesting story line. I don't usually come a cross good story like this and this is by far the best. keep up the good work.
person Anonymous
schedule October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
My god linclon just go full nihilistic on Luna. but dude I hope the next chapter would make him better or made him more emo but anyway dude keep up the good work.
person Anonymous
schedule October 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It's getting better and better. Great work. Dark, steamy, fanatic character personality. Please keep writing.

person Anonman
schedule October 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really good story, hope you continue it.