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for Make It Wit Chu

by DoctorYnot

person Demonking
schedule December 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really good story i think Lincoln is broken i hope you keep it going im curious on what will happen to him in the end

schedule December 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is the first story I read in the Loud fics that is both realistic and really erotic. The fic is so good that I signed up to adult-fanfic just to say this. 



P.S. Will there be a chapter on Luan?

person Yoda
schedule December 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Her lesson learn,  she will not.

person RandomGuest
schedule December 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I wonder who's the next sister to emotionally scar Lincoln.

person Wiz
schedule November 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is extremely well written.

i kinda hope it'll have a happy ending after you go through them all or an orgy.

but I really just hope you continue this.

person Mercy merch
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
o may goad this shit is making me hard
person fartquad
schedule November 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
my god that was awesome.
person Anonymous
schedule November 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
dude awesome story. well so far but I like where ever thing that goes on in the story. I resumed that luan is next. but anyway can't wait for the next chapter.
person Rwr
schedule November 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
God I thought this was going to be just lori raping linclon. and the part with leni I can still forgive but luna I'm not so sure cuzz after she just got up and feeling drowsy and guilty for what she did, she still do it after what happened. great fanfic man keep it up.
schedule November 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love it! I can understand Leni and Luna wanting to have sex with Lincoln, but I hope the author will explain why she decided to rape Lincoln. 

My money is that it has something to do with her and Bobby.