I can't put this down and I must know if this gets worse or better or something I hope there is more is what I'm say ill be watching for any updates
I have to.find out how.this end its ...griping to say the lest I hope it can continue
I have to.find out how.this end its ...griping to say the lest I hope it can continue
This fanfic reminds me of that nirvana song "rape me" everytime i hear it this fic comes to my head an btw this fic is a great piece of writing keep it goin
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(Inhales)
(Exhales sharply)
I.....feel conflicted. On one hand, reading how events play out, how much mental prowess it takes for Lincoln to keep any semblance of himself together.
It quite literally, makes my stomach turn. Watching him get his hopes up before....well...you know.
He's basically trapped himself. Despite everything, he still cherishes his family. Never having what it takes to out them for what they did.
Or even to say no.
And yet, I can't find the strength within myself to stop reading. Part of me is silently hoping that this has a good end.
The way you write scenes is incredible. Its the type of scene building that i wish I could do. The breakdown of the logic with the coyote hit especially hard.
If possible, is there any other social media that you use that I could follow you? Not to pester you about when the story will be updated.
Rather, I love the descriptive way you write and I'd like to learn from it.
First time reviewing on this website; this story is so damn good I am learning how to review here just to be able to do this: great story overall it’s uncomftorable in a good way and I hope to see it continued keep up the good work
Amazing work, hope you update soon! Though a small suggestion; you don't need to post bigger and bigger chapters scaling it down might actually help.
Me again, sorry I just realized I need to voice a question; shouldn't people at school notice that something is off about Lincoln? Also he has friends besides Clyde and his sudden change should be noticable and alarming to them.
Great work, hope this isn't the end to this story!