Chapter 2.
Not bad.
great story i love it
Good story pal , pls continue
Captivating stuff, we'll written... hot and sad at the same time.
man i need to figure out how to get my account going again. this gave me a few ideas. looking foreward to the next chapter.
i do feel bad for linc, lori knowingly raping him, and leni doing so without knowing. waiting to see how he explains that to leni, if he does.
I don't know why I love this depravity.
Excellent, hope it continues and knocks each one of em off!
Very good story cant wait for more
Lincoln's sisters might want be careful or they and lincoln will end up with kids especially Lori and Leni though Leni might already be there from what I just read in her chapter
wonderful story, I love the composition, how you made the characters retain thier characteristics and most of all, I love where this story is going. I can't wait to see more.