Hi, first of all, i Wanna say that I'm sorry for my grammar, because english isn't my principal languaje, with that, i don't know if DoctorYnot Will read this, i hope yes, but my expectations are Little, now, i really enjoy this history and i really hope you come back to return it and give us More of this amazing history, i really hope you've be ok, and got great things I'm you're life. Thank you a Lot.
the story is dark and depressing but its my type of story, it's hard to hope for a happy ending now, the paragraphs were descriptive, but hard to read due to lacking line spaces but its still an amazing read, i hope lincoln gains a happy ending
It is very well written, but that last chapter is way too long, its like 3 or 5 chapters crammed into one, it makes it a chore to read.
A rather formulaic incest story, with all of Lincoln's older sisters taking advantage of him, along with Lucy. Lincoln becomes withdrawn and eventually he gives in. He doesn't report his molestation because he is afraid of breaking up the family, but in the end his spirit is broken.
Lucy Loud has the smallest part, but by far is the most sympathetic character in the story. All of the sisters are blind to damage they causing there brother, although Luna at least has the decency to feel guilty about what she's done.
The narrative switches from the sisters point of view to Lincoln, with stark contrast between how Lincoln sees events and his sister's justification of their acts.
Hello. I read the fanfiction. So sad at first. I wrote a completely different arc. I hope post anyday.