I have browsed this website for YEARS. But this right here is the single most amazing story I have read, so much so that I finally registered my first account JUST so I can leave this, my first-ever review of an AFF fic.
Holy shit. I am impressed. And I want more.
I really enjoy this story, it's really well written. I would love if you continued this
I cannot express how grateful I am for your amazing review, how tremendously gratifying it was to read all your kind words and all the astute insights you had into my story. I fully intend to do the same for yours and give your story a review that can be as valuable to you as yours was to me. I also really appreciate that offer to workshop and proofread and stuff, that's an amazing resource with writers as talented as you guys. I really do think you have one of the best pieces of fanfiction out there, but I'll get more in dept on that when I give you my long review. Apologies for leaving this in your review section, I'll delete it when I make the real review, but it appears there's no way to PM people outside of the forum.
Aaaaaawesome man you got a great writing style very sensual keep it up we need MOAR!
This is, without a doubt, the best SvtFoE story on this site. The character interactions between Star and Marco are terrific, and the drama feels real and earned. Marco in particular really feels true to character. Star a little less so, although obviously she *is* under the spell of Mewberty, so it's understandable that she would be a little different here.
The smutty scene's are very well written, and it all feels like it has such an incredible emotional core to it. Truly wonderful. I really hope that the author will write something again. Especially if it's SvtFoE related. There have been a whole lot more developments in the show since the time this one was published, and it'd be awesome if whoever wrote this story could do a new one reflecting some of the changes in the show.
Anyway- I don't know if the author will get to read this, but if you do- Thank you for writing such an emotional, and sweet story. It is truly a joy to read.
Wish you all the best!
I am TypeAlphaAnarchy,
And I approve of this fanfic.
Don't let this fic fade to obscurity, I needz moar. The fandom needs moar quality content brotha
I seriously love rare gems like this story! I had chills running down my spine the entire time I was reading it! I would like nothing better than to see you continue this awesome masterpiece :D
I am TypeAlphaAnarchy,
And I approve of this fanfic.
Don't let this fic just be two chapters long!
Gosh, this is really super. I've been devouring it just a small piece at a time to make it last since after the first chapter I checked to see if you'd written any other stories and saw that you hadn't. You're a master of the slow burn and stoking anticipation. By the time they're watching the movie and physically can't stand it I'm right there with them.
Thanks for making this. I hope you write more stories, you're truly talented.