You’re writing can be difficult to read at times (mainly because of easily fixable grammar/mechanical errors), but I liked it nonetheless. It is interesting and unique. I, for one, appreciated it not having sex. Like the moderator said, there are so many “mature” themes that we, as writers, can explore, and those themes don’t always have to involve mashing of genitals. I would like to see you continue this.
This review is in response to the reviewer named Tom:
While I do not make a habit of communicating with readers via review board, I think this needs to be addressed where others can see the following explanation.
AFF is not an archive restricted to merely erotic fiction. There are many themes which would be considered adult reading material in nature, and not all of them contain sex. I would point you to any public library's adult reading section for examples. We have a NoSex tag specifically because we are well aware of this. I would suggest, if all you wish to read is erotic fiction, you do not click on stories tagged as NoSex, because we would not be pleased to see you make a habit of leaving reviews with the incorrect supposition that sex is a requirement here.
All the best,
BronxWench
AFF Archive Moderator
put in some sex scenes or don't continue the story this website is for adult erotic fan fiction