Maybe Lincoln could make as many tentacles/dicks as he wants so he could have five to use on each sister or sisters that want in like one/pussy one/ass one/mouth two/hands and the rest can be used for to bound his sisters and grope their boobs then Lincoln could be a one man sex machine that can fill and cover them in cum
Love the story so far! Btw, do you post on any other sites, like AO3?
Wonderfull story,kudos on the way you made every loud house character play a part. I love where this story is going, and how you want to give every girl a turn and leave no one out. can't wait for an update.
I love what you did with the most recent chapter. You're developing the story in an interesting way. To lay your worries to rest, the direction you're going in with this story is not stupid. I actually like it quite a bit. That the chemicals that are reletively harmless to the sisters, almost killed Lincoln. You're giving him basic super powers now which, as long as you continue to write with the same skill level, can only make things even more interesting. I'm also eager to learn what secrets his sisters have been keeping from him. I impatiently await the next chapter, keep up the good work.
Absolutely fantastic story so far. I've never seen the show but your work has single=handedly made me want to check it out in the near future. There is so much to praise about this, the dialogue you come up between the characters is really some of the best Ive ever seen in slash fiction. The really in-depth details is just fantastic and really puts you in the scene. The kinks and scenarios youve made so far are really unique and creative and that is just for the seemingly most 'normal' girl of the bunch, it makes me extremely excited to see what kind of wacky shenanigans you come up for the more eccentric...and dare i say younger sisters. Keep up the great work!
I just have to say that the plot in this story is just amazing, I loved the latest chapter even without the sex that has occupied the other chapters. Makes me curious about what exactly Lisa has been planning for months and I am eagerly awaiting for further chapters. On a side note , your style of writing is exactly what I am looking for in erotic stories, sex with enough of a plot so it doesn't get old and stale. I know even when this story ends, I will be checking back every day for the next story you write, just as i check back every day for a new chapter of this story.
Maybe Lincoln should collect panties from the last day with each sister
Great chapter can't wait to read more of Leni I can see Leni and Lori double teaming lincoln multiple times after their turns are done and the others as well
Great story i have enjoyed it but like lori in the story i don't want it to end i think after lincoln has his turn with all his sisters you could still keep the story going beyond that since all his sisters will probably be like lori and never want their relationship with lincoln to end so i hope even after once all the sisters have had their turn with lincoln the story will keep going
Oh, man. I was waiting incredibly impatiently for this installment. You already have me hooked. I love your character developement. You have the Loud family interact in a believable way, which is a challenge for some. One niggle, I sometimes have to pause to figure out who's talking. Other than that, it's perfect. I eagerly await the next chapter.