Another great chapter keep up the good work
Wow I never would have thought Leni would be dominant one of the group
Maybe Lincoln should be the dominat as a reward for leni
Omg please keep this story here or at least email me where you do this story is amazing. My email bb001927@gmail.com please contact me I love this story
All I got to ask is when is the next chapter going to be posted. The anticipation is killing me so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.
Great story so far cant really complain about a single part of it been checking back several times everyday to see if there a new chapter
Another great chapter!
AO3 stands for Archive of Our Own, and it's a fanfiction site similar to fanfiction.net, but less restrictive. One of the things I like about it is that authors can add their own tags to a story, which readers can use when searching the site. In order to make an account there, you need an invitation code. I can procure one for you if you'd like.
Speaking of fanfiction.net, that's another site where you can post your story. It's a bit more restrictive than AO3, but as far as I can tell it's the major fanfiction site.
Other sites you could post on include Deviantart and Tumbr.
One great thing about all of these sites, is that you can either add tags to your stories and/or file them under catagories (it depends on the site), which will help expose your writings to more people.
Go ahead and email me if you want that AO3 invitation code, and please let me know what sites you decide to post on, so I can go and favorite/follow/like/bookmark etc.
First I want to say "Yay" that three new chapters will be coming soon. I can not begin to tell you how much I enjoy this series already,or how many times that I check your page to see if the next chapter has appeared. Second , the plot that you are writing is just amazing , that is acting almost like a drug to my system, I read and I just have to have more to see what is going to happen next , so congratulations on that. Especially since you do it in a way that I just never see coming , thought after chapter seven , i never expected to see him protecting his sisters like that. That was just a jaw dropping moment for me in this amazing story. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Oh, get off it. The latest chapter fails to realize that most 'criminals' are simply people who are trying to provide for their families because they have been pushed to the margins of society.
Lincoln would do well to remember that but for the grace of Fate, he could have been ANY ONE OF THEM and that killing ANYONE when you have the power that you do not have to do that is wrong.
If I had the abilities of Superman, just like him, I would refuse to take another person's life (save if they were putting someone else's life in danger at that very moment and I could not 'save' that person without taking that life).
Here? Lincoln went apeshit for good reasons but he did not have to kill anyone. A few broken arms and legs and those guys would have been down for the count.
All I can say after reading the last review is don't let negativity change how you write. Honestly to me , how Lincoln reacted is more realistic. Just the feeling of wanting to despertly protect those you care for no matter what and the fact that this abilities are just appearing. With both of these ideas in mind, what you wrote is the logical reaction of that desire to protect and the inexperience of having all of this power appear at once. As I have said before, huge fan and just wanted to spread my own opinion when I was checking out the site.