Really well put together story
So Lucy wants her mouth, pussy and ass stretched so wide open that Lincolns dick is the only one that can fill it and make her feel like a virgin every time as she squeezes him like one too, cool.
Poor Lincoln, haha.
Now Lincoln has no way out.
Great chapter.
This is the greatest story i have ever read, this story is just as good as another comic i read, called Lincoln Louder (check it out!) but sadly i think got abandoned but is quite a long nsfw story. I love the loud stories that include all the sisters and this was very entertaining to read and kept me wanting more. I hope you make more stories after you finish this especially ones like these!
Awesome first chapter. The dialogue was kept very in-character and I hope you can maintain it through out the story. I also love the buildup you have going, though I hope it doesn't take to long for the Loud sisters to get their hands on Lincoln :)
great story i am guessing lori regrets what she has done but i am guessing not all of the them will regret it i hope even after they all have their turn with lincoln they will still want him in the same way and i hope the story will keep going after they have all had their turn with lincoln i am enjoying it
The formula in chapter 3 may have been Lisa's plan B*, but I give it an A+. I knew something was up the moment she said Lincoln had to receive the formula because the problem was with the sisters. (Sure, the injection could have made him register to the girls as "not a man" or something, I suppose, but this is a lemon after all. :))
Also, great to hear her "I can do a lot of things" again, especially in this context. :D
The intensity of the girls' desire for him was portrayed fantastically, so matter-of-fact and even with the realization that it was wrong. Lori saying as much and then ignoring it until after the first turn with Lincoln was great, and even better that with them knowing that all of the other sisters were watching eagerly too. No jealousy is certainly a plus, and the way Lori and Leni were able to get back to normal afterwards was a good sign. (Then again, that hamster is still on the loose in the vents, so…)
Good thing Lisa included some anti-anxiety medication in the "save Lincoln's ass from dying from too much ass" formula. The bit about them being Catholic was perfectly timed and just a beautiful thing. The bit about Lincoln being smooth was cool too, but given his life situation he would have some good instincts when it comes to making girls happy apart from sexually. Leni's talking would drive most people to softness, if not insanity, but he made it work. The bits of detail for each climax are a sweet payoff for all the wonderful build up to now, and being to-the-point works well with so many girls lined up and waiting.
Great job on so many little jokes throughout too. Having Luna provide a soundtrack to the event was funny, and Lola's remark about Lana's overalls was fantastic. (I'm glad you ignored the first rule of Fight Cloud in this case. ;)) Lisa's bits of humor were great too, especially the flavor of the special painkiller for the occasion. (Good thing too because regular NSAIDs can dull sexual response.)
Best of all, you've left me satisfied but still wanting so much more. Thanks for another great installment of this happy tale.
*Speaking of "Plan B" I hope Lisa can whip some up for her older sisters so they don't end up having even more kids in that cramped house.
WOOT WOOT! Good to see you're back at it. Hopefully, more people start showing some love to this show. The story pool is really small right now, but I have faith in rule #34. I really like how well you translate the characters to keep them believable in your story. A thought to consider, do you recall the episode (chore and peace, I think?) Where Lisa was riding a tentacle from a monster she created as it helped her clean the house? Just a thought, might be fun to experiment with that one.