One of the best nsfw loud stories i have ever read. Most of the other amazing lewd house stories i read only focus on one loud sister, this takes the cake for doing ALL of the sisters. Of course this is not the first fanfic to do a lewd story with all of the sisters. What sets this fanfic apart from the rest is that the story doesn't get bland later on and the lewd scenes don't get boring after say the 4th sister for example. Most just make a amazing nsfw story with one sister or a rushed uninteresting nsfw story to accomodate all 10 sisters, this is a hybrid of them both merged together. I thank the author for this memorable story, and as a lynncoln fan myself, i applaud you for making such a great nsfw scene. I hope you decide to make more Loud house fanfics after this, maybe a lynncoln fic one day? ;):):)
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I think I like Lucy's the best
It picked up nicely with the momentum of the last chapter's "cliffhanger" moment, and the stunned silence was a nice touch. Lincoln understanding her deeper, not-even-sexual need for intimacy and recognition was very poignant too… though I'm still glad they totally did it. It was cute that her lacy panties were a surprise for Lincoln, though I'm sure lots of her devoted fans suspected it all along. :) Her dialogue was very in-character with its poetry and softness. Their lovemaking was terrific, especially how special it seemed to Lincoln in contrast to all of the other sex.
Lana is super in her love of dirty things, and Lincoln's suggestion was spot-on for us as much as for her. Her enthusiasm was brilliant throughout, and it had a great build-up and a powerfully fun messy ending. Perfect.
Lola was surprisingly well-informed about what kinds of things sex was good for, as far as career advancement, which made me laugh… then a touch sad too, now that I think about it too much. Still, it was funny that she understood the logistics very well too for her "practice," and they hade a great back-and-forth. (I loved the crazy Trixie Tang moment.) Afterwards, Lola comported herself very professionally, but we have to hope that the experience made an impression on her at some level.
Finally, nice of Lisa to turn her catchphrase around after showing Lincoln she's well versed in a particular set of interpersonal skills too. I'm eager to see what else she can teach him (and maybe even learn herself). Thanks for another terrific chapter.
This is a awesome comic hope u keep making it
So, Lisa's the a less assholery version of "Dexter"... I guess she's far more sociable than the redhead used to be, though, she apparently is as irresponsable as the "original" cartoon genious.
I must confess that Lincoln persona is slightly annoying with his tendency to break the fourth wall. Which apparently is canonical, and done in a more humorous sense. I guess I'll have to get accustomed to it, at least you do it with some modicum of sense and the commentaries end up adding more to the story than substracting or breaking the pace, which is good.
Apparently you're going with a slow burn story, good. At least you're not jumping ahead into the sex, as I might need to get the gist of every character and their traits. The video you left helped a lot, but I prefer to read and grasp them.
I commited the mistake of reading other stories before yours, to compare... and Good Lord... the angst, the fandom is already filling with a good amount of angst, which is... kind of tiresome in the long run, especially as the authors hasn't updated in a while, or doesn't seem all that interested in updating or advancing further than they already are.
Then, there's the other story, which apparently the author is bitting more than he could deliver with a frustratingly slow story that's trying to give way too much attention to too many characters... which is why I'm hoping you don't commit the same mistake, the series seems interesting, not as much as SvsFOE, but apparently good enough for a laugh or two, and obviously, a good amount of porn.
Let's see how you manage to deal with so many characters, and not make it bothersome or downright boring.
Hell... you're going to get a lot of flak due to how young some of the characters are.
Now, It's interesting that Lisa is actually far more sociable than the usual trope of boy/girl genious/prodigy. Her lisp/tick is also quite adorable when it comes out, and you do it well enough without overusing it.
Now I wonder, how aware are the girls of what they're doing? It's just a mindless desire, or the pheromones are overworking their sexual drive to such a extense, that they actually don't care about what they're doing, they just want release, and Lincoln is obviously the only male available.
Also... I'm quite curious, it's slightly improbable that from such an amount of girls, none of them had displayed so far homosexual/bisexual desires. Is Lincoln the only one that's going to get pursued? It seems so... Also, I'm quite curious why the pheromone doesn't affect him, I mean, while it's devised to enhance his own, the girls are in overdrive... they should be expelling their own mutation of the pheromone, or their regular one with such a huge amount of girls... he should at least be slightly affected, though, he's full of chemicals right now due to his panic, so I guess that's countering some of the effects.
And finally, it drops...
So, they're aware. Just in overdrive, their impulses so strong that they don't care about the consequences of what they're about to do, they just want to appeace the drive.
And, poor Lincoln... he's currently pumped to the brims with drugs and natural chemicals, and while what he's doing is probably going to make him feel guilty for a few minutes, I guess the pleasure is going to make it all better... for a while at least.
I'm also wondering if Lisa's going to take into consideration chaffing, Lincoln is going to severely damage his skin with so much action... is she going to counteract such a thing with a cream? humectant? Salve? Something that not only manages to alleviate the slight burn of overused skin, but also repair and obviously enhance the pleasure of those that might or not be too... tight for such activities?
I loved Luna... my mind is enjoying this fic, more for what they're doing and how goofy and cartoony it's. For some reason, the tune and rithm of Luna's was in my mind a variation of porn/funky of Something about us of Daft Punk. Curious, because it's a more guitar bass song, than guitar which seems it's the instrument she's playing at.
I wonder as well, are there going to be repeats among the girls with a more slow and loving pace and less neurotic needy movements? Lori seemed partially done, but I wonder if she's going to come back for more, or she's really completely done... and yes, you're obviously doing each girl quite fast, but still quite believable under the circunstances...
And, I applaude you.
Why? You've managed to capture each girl in such a fashion, that each one of them so far has felt unique, and not as a re-do of others or in some cases, the same girl.
Luna's anthics with music and rithm, Luan (who's probably going to come back for more, as she hasn't actually had complete sex with him... unlike her sisters.) And Lynn are so different, and each moved by a different but quite poignant theme, that it's refreshing despite how short the sex is.
I saw Lisa taking care of Lincoln and the girls, it's obvious that she's still working hard to make things slightly less painfull for all of them... Though, Lincoln might need to drink some liquids soon, maybe another batch of chemicals to prevent the consecuense of such an amount of excercise.
And... Lucy. I wonder if what she had said will have some consequences, I mean, they're all aware of their actions, even if hypersexualized. And Lucy so far has been the only one that doesn't want to simply fuck and get over it to satiate her need, but she wants to be loved... which might force some of the girls to think about what they're doing, changing their second session with Lincoln, especially the pace.
But I have the feeling that maybe you don't want to enlarge the story too much, as it gets slightly hard to do in such a fashion. Still, you've always managed to ensure at least good amount of advance in the characters on all your stories, even develop them further due to the consecuences of their actions... I hope to read more of this soon.
Sorry for the long wait. Hope you can update soon.
“I need you to make love with me.” I love this line.