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Really great job with Lucy and can't wait to see who's next in the story.

Well, that was unexpected. Just a few unexpected thoughts and everything changes. Way to go brain. Well, I don't think Ben is going to complain any time soon. Anyway here are a few ideas for the ladies. Attea and Looma Redwind- both come to earth searching for Ben so they can marry him like in omniverse. In the end it comes down to a seduction contest and they both end up addicted to the shape changer. Charmcaster- she is having a rough spot with her boyfriend, Darkstar, in retaliation for him hurting her, she grabs Ben, seduces him, and winds up banging him with her boyfriend watching. Now for some future ideas. Danny phantom: danny's ghost powers have been playing havoc with Danny's hormones, including the size of his endowment. He's been having excessively wet dreams about the women in his life, from his rogue's gallery and home/school. After some serious teasing from Paulina, Danny snaps and proceeds to act on his lust. After that Danny sets his sights on the various women around town. Harem: Paulina, Maddie Fenton, Desiree, Star, Spectra, Valerie Grey, Pamela Manson, Dora, or others. Kim Possible: After Ron learns that Kim has been cheating on him with Josh Mankey. While angry he runs into Bonnie who sees this opportunity to one up Kim. After sleeping with him she decides to turn Ron into the most desired boy in Middleton high, earning Ron many female admirers and girls willing to share his bed. Harem: Bonnie Rockwaller, Connie Rockwaller, Lonnie Rockwaller, Anne Possible, Monique, Shego, Zita, Middleton Cheer Sqad, or more.

Since Ben will be getting a harem, Ben should buy each girl a collar with their names on the front and his name with the words property on the back with the address of his penthouse hope the idea is ok to use

Maybe Gwen could've given Ben the idea of not keeping his dick all to herself it should be shared show women what a real man looks like and the more Ben uses his dick on Gwen or any girl he gets more stamina to keep going so that he can fill every hole the girls in his harem has with his dick and cum

I must admit, having read both chapters, this is off to a good start, and I look forward to seeing what happens next. I do hope to see doggy style anal soon, as I have a bit of a preference for that. Here's a suggestion: Perhaps you could have Looma, or another female alien of some sort, get it on with Ben at one point, and during the foreplay, he rips off her clothing. Then the next morning, he wakes up with her and finds her not bothering with clothing except for when leaving the house. This is because, due to her alien culture, when the female's mate rips off her clothes, she is to be naked and ready for when said mate feels like going at it again, and she is to grow accustomed to not having any clothes on except for when pertaining to matters outside the home. Sound interested?

Loved this chapter, but the Lucie parts confused me a bit, but still really great chapter.

Really great job, but Max is Ben and Gwen's grandfather not Uncle, but still loved this and can't wait to see what you do next.

For members of the harem, here's a few ideas: Kai Green, Julie Yamamoto, Rook Shar.