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for Pool Boy

by TheHiddenDarkness

person Anonymous
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I loved it balanced story 

person Anonymous
schedule July 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Smiling Lemon

Damn that was fucking hot and I can't wait to see what you have planned for Yori. Also this shit it awesome ronxharem for the win!

person Anonymous
schedule July 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Whoa... Kim and Anne take mother daughter bonding to a whole new level. Kudos.

Hope to see more of it in the future. Not enough Anne/Kim pairings out there if you ask me.

person Anonymous
schedule July 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey it's the Ann fan again. Just wanted to say how much I am loving the story so far, especially the scene between Ann and the twins. Hubba hubba. Keep up the great work.

person Anonymous
schedule July 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hey it's the Ann Fan again. This latest chapter was something else, and I mean that in the best possible way (pun intended). I'd also like to give you props for how you brought Kim into the story. Usually when Ron's going to town on the ladies in these type of fics it's because Kim was being a total cheating bitch. Needless to say your approach of keeping Kim in character was a breath of fresh air. Something I'm sure other fans of the show appreciate as much as I do. FYI I cannot wait to see what happens when Kim finds out the Ron Bon sitch. That just screams hilarious (not to mention 'cat-fight') hee hee.

Can't wait for the next update.

person Anonymous
schedule July 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

story is hot and i really like how its progressing. But like the others i cant wait to see what the other women in the series does whe they find out. Mostly i want to see what happens when kim finds out when she returns.

person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Smiling Lemon

Damn this story is hot and I fucking love it. My friend I can't wait to see how you add other girls into the story.

person Anonymous
schedule July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story, but it would be a crying shame if Shego and Monique got less attention than Vivian Porter

person Smiling lemon
schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is fucking hot and fuck. I can't wait to see what's next!
person That Guy
schedule June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big Anne fan so needless to say I really liked this chapter. Looking forward to more Ron/Bonnie fun too, part of me always wished they'd end up together in the show. By the way, is there any chance of maybe a Ron/Vivian Porter chapter? Or better yet a Ron/Anne/Vivian chapter? THAT I'd LOVE to see.