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for The Collar

by foobar137

schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, well done. A true joy to read. Felt very true to the characters, in reaction, speach, and I could truly see the relationship developing that way.
schedule May 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Still a very good story I wonder if other reviews will say chapter 2 please but I think you should decide because you wrote it