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As promised, there's my other review. I loved the fact that you approached Candace/Phineas first, as I must admit I was more invested upon them than Linda/Ferb. I mean, L/F could be set in another way, Ferb probably doesn't have memories of his biological mother, and the fact that he had touched her tit could put another road in their dream, one that has him reaching up to her with the angle of "breast feeding", which Linda could or not enjoy, and end up being the instigator for something far more intimate. (I just hope she downright dominates the whole thing, as it's quite obvious that she might or not be a quite powerful woman in bed...) But going back to C/P... it was interesting to see that Candace dream version was actually far more aggresive than Phineas version, which is actually closer to canon. Phineas is a quite recesive or reactive boy, while Candace has been obsessing on trapping him, on getting him, on winning... there must be quite a lot of frustration that she had obviously released there, which could do her a lot of good, or a lot of bad. She sadly tend's to repress many things... But here she was forced to let it go, to stop repressing her feelings all over, which ended up with her busting her brother, but not exactly as she had thought she would. I simply adored the final dialogue, the "Wow" and "Yes" felt so Candace that I couldn't prevent the smile on my lips. Thank you for writing, as always.

Well,that was certainly one of the more intense things you have written. I really liked it though, and I cant wait for the next chapter :-) Joma

It was pleasant enough to read about a beautiful day at the beach, but then the happy accidents happened and it was clear that no one would just forget about it. You did a wonderful job setting up how each of the characters, once alone with their thoughts in the dark, dwelled on their innocent encounters to the point where they weren't so innocent anymore. The dual seduction of calm partial-Phineas and somewhat more urgent partial-Candace was very well played, especially since their seductive dream counterparts had those properties – a complimentary flavor to their real-live selves perhaps? Once their dreams merged and they got down to some sweet passionate lovemaking it was quite enjoyable: the pace was good, and their climaxes were quite satisfying even as a reader. I'm not a total incest fiend, but for some reason it just felt "right" that they should finally enjoy intimacy instead of that weird level of background enmity (which is mostly Candace, yes, but it's not like Phineas ever tries to tell Linda that his big sister isn't a nutjob). The fact that they ended up in Candace's bed (though in a shared dream, I'm assuming) suggests that her desire was stronger than his; maybe that explains why the Phineas "dream tempter" was so much more calm than temptress Candace. (Or maybe I'm just reading way too much into it. :) ) So awesome job so far. I look forward to chapter 3 and beyond. Thanks.

This has got to be the best PhineasxCandace story with sex scenes in it that I've ever read - not that that's up against such stiff competition, admittedly. But it's still unusual for a pornographic story to include a Perry-and-Doof scene that, although clearly meant to move the plot along, is plausible given what usually happens in those scenes, and even the whole contrived coincidence thing - Phineas, Ferb, Candace and Linda experiencing something sexual on the day Doof launches that specific inator - is plausible in PnF context. And I suppose it's not unreasonable for that kind of inator to connect people who were thinking about each other as they fell asleep. The characterization is sufficiently good as well, especially considering the whole dream nature of the story making stuff possible that wouldn't have been otherwise. I like the little details such as Doof's fears being public humiliation and giant bats, and Candace arranging her plush toys to make it look like she's not big on them anymore, because they make the fic feel grounded in the show. It's a bit odd how there are only short scenes before you switch from one POV to the other. I'm glad you didn't intersplice the Phindace stuff in Ch. 2 with Ferb and Linda too, because that might have made it far too complicated. I think I might have preferred it if you had just one Phineas and Candace sharing a dream from the start, but this does make the concept more original and the wish-fullfilment (relating to the sex scene) more realistic. But I suppose there might be more of that in one of the next chapters, right? The fact that the actual sex scene was so short made it feel a bit off, but I guess that was because they were in pretty deep (figuratively) at that stage. And you got me intrigued with the idea of 'accumulated desires of a lifetime together'. I hope you'll expand a little on that in a later chapter. The way Phineas and Candace giving in to their respective fantasies unites them in one dream is also good. It's interesting that Candace giving in to Phineas is happening at the same pace as Phineas giving into Candace. I would have imagined Phineas to be the less resistant one, given he canonically often acts more fond of Candace than she does of him. (Not that canonCandace doesn't love her brother, but the strength of Phineas' feelings towards her is pretty remarkable sometimes.) Now I'm kinda curious what the FerbxLinda scene will be like, but I'm even more curious to see the aftermath of the whole story. That'll probably be... awkward. But what happens next is hard to say at this point, so I'll wait and see.

Well, this is certainly different from your usual. Glad to see another P&F story from you, I'm looking forward to the next chaper.

Glad to see this one finally getting the limelight (or whatever you would call it in a dream) Greatly written, the characters are on point, and the inator was a great idea :-) Can't wait for the next chapter! Joma