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May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work, mate. Loved how slutty Gaz was and how much she enjoyed that cock. Keep up the good work!
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March 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lucky fucking bastard. Best keep in mind he is gaz' bitch now. Finally someone does a fox of gaz based on the artwork of bigdad/darnact nicely done
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December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like your Poke'mon fics, but thanks to FA artist BigDad, I can imagine your Gaz stories in almost perfect detail. More like this, please!
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December 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story, much prefer Gaz on human and hope there'll be more of that to come (possibly with your OC, not saying you should go romantic and not saying you shouldn't I just like him is all). Love that she's both a size queen and a power bottom.
Critique time so feel free to skip this part. Punctuation didn't really bother me but it was missing. The big one was I felt there was a lack of detail both during and not during the sex. Example, "As his dick shot cum all over Gaz's face and tits she quickly opened her mouth and cupped her breasts together to catch as much as she could. Her eyes remained open to watch his cock twitch as it deposited its payload all over her." or maybe she kept her eyes open cause she likes the sting I dunno. Point is I felt things could've been described more in depth.
Critique time so feel free to skip this part. Punctuation didn't really bother me but it was missing. The big one was I felt there was a lack of detail both during and not during the sex. Example, "As his dick shot cum all over Gaz's face and tits she quickly opened her mouth and cupped her breasts together to catch as much as she could. Her eyes remained open to watch his cock twitch as it deposited its payload all over her." or maybe she kept her eyes open cause she likes the sting I dunno. Point is I felt things could've been described more in depth.
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December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
:)
I like. Good. Very good.
I like. Good. Very good.