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for The Adventures of Jaune

by Blueshirt

schedule September 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Your story is awesome, pleased continue writing it. 

person MagicMan
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
this story has been incredible! Looking forward to the next chapters
person Anon
schedule December 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I was waiting for Weiss to get her comeuppance. Let's see how long that's gonna last.
And now poor Ruby knows of her teams shenanigans. One can only guess what happens next.
schedule November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Should have guessed Blake was next. Great chapter nonetheless, pretty sexy stuff.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Pretty hot stuff. Can't wait to see what you do with the other girls, especially Ruby and Pyrrha.
schedule November 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Um, it's spelled Jaune, not Juane. It was kinda annoying seeing his name spelled wrong literally every time. Other than that, it was a pretty hot start, though I must say, the first two chapters felt kind of short. Definitely looking forward to seeing more.
person wxyz
schedule November 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It is Jaune Arc, not Juane.