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for Blue Fire Pyre

by PaleWhiteLine

person Maddi
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to see where exactly this story is headed. Admittedly, it's a little dry and boring in places, particularly the beginning but the mystery is intriguing enough to make me wonder what is happening. Also Bill is there, which always makes things more interesting. Your writing is great and you captured the characters well. Interested to see more of this story!