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for The Tunnel

by PineWreths

person DarkAlpha
schedule October 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
a absolutely great story! love it.
schedule October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm cheating on this review because I've already read it on Tumblr ("pinewreaths" over there). That said, this is a great story!

This is another “how they first got together” Pinecest story, and it is wonderful in every way. Characterization and dialogue are both spot-on. The premise and location (at an elaborate amusement park themed around water slides and attractions) are original, and the interactions are adorable, yet awkward. And there is absolutely top-notch NSFW content here as well, if that floats your boat.

Everyone is going to love the stuff you'll be getting from PineWreaths.