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for It's Different for Boys

by GeorgeGlass

person GrayNeko
schedule August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a fun piece, you have the characters down which is always a plus. I dig Marco becoming a red displacer beast and I can't say I would have minded Star being on the receiving end of his monster cock but that was a great bit of humor nonetheless. It had just the right amount of humor and romantic fluff and works perfectly as a one off. My one major thought is that the tentacles could have had a little more play during the actual coupling, helping to drive Star completely wild but it might have made the sex scene too complicated so I don't really consider it an issue.