rate_review Reviews

What a sweet ending, I'm guessing Marco and Star are best friends with benefits now

What can I say, this was one of the better reads I've had in a while!

I'd love to see this story continued. I want to see the emotional consequences on these characters. I also want to see how Marco "improvises" now that he doesn't have tentacles.

(Copying my review from Aug. 12, 2015, here since WWOEC went kaput.) Star's dialogue in character, and I especially like the little naughty bits that crept in there too. Whether turning a lab partner into a lizard or talking about members or getting shackles from her room, she was terrific. Oh, and quite an awesome friend to give herself over to the Marco beast. Those were some great descriptions of some great scenes, both the chase and then the wonderfully sweet sex itself. Tentacles always make things better, right? :) Then to put the cherry on top was Star's thought about it being better without Marco's inhibitions and stuff. MARCO: “I'm really glad you're my friend.” Understatement of the year! Thanks for writing and sharing such a fun and lustful tale. :)

Man, I'm envious... you have this ability to capture the personalities and quirks of the characters so well that you downright nail them. Star responses and jokes, the dialogue between them. I can honestly say that yours and probably another one over here is certainly the best ones in a section and fandom that desperately needs good fanfics. Thank you for updating, I send you an Email to the account at your profile with an idea that had been torturing me for months, but that I haven't been able to get into a cohesive or stable story, if you're curious. Also, thank you for the story... really.

Ah yes consensual monster sex. At times it can be just as sexy as monster rape and this is one of those times.

I love this first chapter! I had outlined a story 34ing the Muberty episode, but your story puts what I had outlined to shame! And the ending of the chapter was fantastic! They may be FWB's now, but it can still turn into love. "Prince Marco" has a nice ring to it!

That was fun, sexy, and cute, and all wrapped in a quick, efficient package. High five for your work, Mr. Glass.

Congradulations. Your story made me laugh the most out of all the other smut I've read.

Ah, that Mewberty episode really did the hard work for a lot of fic writers I imagine... Great story, funny, sexy, and most importantly the characters sounded like themselves! 10 thumbs up.