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October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
ga I know this is my forth comment on this story but you said around the time of my last one that in a week or so you'd have a new chapter and that the one after that was already finished, which I thought meant that it would pop up shortly after chapter 4, but that was three weeks ago.
I hope you're doing well and that nothing bad has happened to delay the updates. if by a slim chance something bad has happened I hope you get better soon.
I hope you're doing well and that nothing bad has happened to delay the updates. if by a slim chance something bad has happened I hope you get better soon.
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September 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very good, very good. Looking forward to the next part.
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September 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Another stellar chapter! I half worried that you had died off! (I tend to overreact)
Can't really say much more than I love how you are fleshing things out, and how adventurous the are being.
Can't really say much more than I love how you are fleshing things out, and how adventurous the are being.
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September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
it's been a few weeks now and not a sign of a new chapter. I really hope you plan on continuing your work it would be a big shape if you left the story at such a cliff hanger.
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September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEE I'm so glad you did another chapter, I hope my two reviews in a row didn't make you feel rushed, I just read both chapters again last night and couldn't help but ask again.
when I popped on today and seen you had another chapter up but it wasn't titled like the last to but instead just it's name I was worried that you felt rushed but after a few lines in I could see that it was as good as the last two if only half as long as ether of them. I'm hoping that's because your saving the best part for after pizza.
when I popped on today and seen you had another chapter up but it wasn't titled like the last to but instead just it's name I was worried that you felt rushed but after a few lines in I could see that it was as good as the last two if only half as long as ether of them. I'm hoping that's because your saving the best part for after pizza.
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August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
first of all I'd like to say I haven't been on AFF in a few months, maybe nearly a year, to read something and the first time I come on in so long I found your story and by the gods of smutty writing it must have been fate. I'm a big fan of the show and I loved every moment of your story, the characters are perfect there isn't a bad thing I could think of to say about it.
I've been so eagerly awaiting the next chapter, or chapters, that I've been checking the site every other day since I finished the second chapter. please post more very, very, very soon.
I've been so eagerly awaiting the next chapter, or chapters, that I've been checking the site every other day since I finished the second chapter. please post more very, very, very soon.
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July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 and holy shit I wish I could rate it 5 stars for each chapter so far!
I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm looking forward to what more is in store!
Keep up the amazing work! I CAN'T ADD ENOUGH EXCLAMATION POINTS TO EMPHASIZE THIS!!!
I'm really enjoying this story, and I'm looking forward to what more is in store!
Keep up the amazing work! I CAN'T ADD ENOUGH EXCLAMATION POINTS TO EMPHASIZE THIS!!!
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July 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you
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July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is such a lovely story, the emotions and the erotic content are done so well. You keep them in character darn near perfectly and I really enjoyed the idea that Steven's Gem half makes his cum a pleasant experience for Connie. Please keep up the great work.51
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July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness.... an awesome story that we need more of.