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for The Cold Dark

by Ambrosia

schedule October 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to continue this, it sounds really good so far. You should continue to writing, and you miss spelled Jack's name in one of the paragraphs. Just so you know and I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule July 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hope this gets new chapter soon!