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person kojivsleo
schedule May 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Dipper you idiot! Well here comes the angst you promised, but hopefully it doesn't go into stupid levels like the show Supernatural has.
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It can't be over Dipper tell your parents
schedule May 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow...who knew wincest could be so complicated.
person Belfry
schedule May 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! It's cold! It's cruel! Just ten more seconds!
schedule May 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
you should totally pick up the tely becaus i fuckin called it!
person kojivsleo
schedule May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that unlike some stories they're trying to talk their problems out and try to solve the issue instead of tying to deny it exist.
question, did you ever get those stories I sent to you, and have you made up your mind about posting on fanfiction?
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's sweet they will be able to go back to their love making
schedule May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah good job on another chapter.
person ForgetMeNaught
schedule May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ideas are present here throughout, Mr. Ford. I applaud your courage for turning toward angst instead of sickly sweet romance; you'll be pleasantly rewarded for that path here as much as you were in Fistbump the original.

Just a quick note though: you've taken to using page breaks, which is good for pacing your story, but you don't need to use page breaks when flipping between character perspectives when they're the main characters and in the same room at the same time. Again, just a note.
person kojivsleo
schedule May 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, right in the feels...