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October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I caught up, and can only say this: "oh shit"
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September 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It begins...
Sorry I didn't get the chance to read and review earlier, my friend. But you didn't disappoint! Bring the hurt!
Sorry I didn't get the chance to read and review earlier, my friend. But you didn't disappoint! Bring the hurt!
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September 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was worth waiting for. The emotion that both are feeling brings great sorrow as well as the way in which each person deals with these problems. This is one of the best chapters with a great plot twist at the end. Hope the other chapters don't take long can't wait to read them.
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September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories that I have read. The sense of emotion reflects that of real life. You are highly talented at this, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon. Great work
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August 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The Angst is real.
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August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I believe we have reached peak angst, hopefully it starts to normalize back to lower levels of it.
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August 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I like this direction. Good ploy with the head injury, Mr. Ford.
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August 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Christ bro. you make a man not want incest. lol
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August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good to see chapter 7 at long last. Welcome back.
I love the formatting choices you made; good way to sprinkle in extra background without needing to add more day to day interaction. It was telling, though, how rushed this chapter was, and in the end it didn't really feel like we went anywhere compared to chapter 6, if I may say. It seemed as if you couldn't wait to get the chapter out of the way as opposed to not being able to wait to show it off.
As for that tension, I dig where it's going. Bottle that stuff and use it full force.
I love the formatting choices you made; good way to sprinkle in extra background without needing to add more day to day interaction. It was telling, though, how rushed this chapter was, and in the end it didn't really feel like we went anywhere compared to chapter 6, if I may say. It seemed as if you couldn't wait to get the chapter out of the way as opposed to not being able to wait to show it off.
As for that tension, I dig where it's going. Bottle that stuff and use it full force.
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June 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You claim it's very angsty but I find it well balanced, with some great character growth and development, really good situations and dialogue (including the internal dialogue), plus some really good hot sex scenes. Sure, the bumps are a bit painful, but they do make for a better story. I have to feel bad for Dipper though because he seems to take the brunt of things a bit more. (Less than average penis, premature ejaculation, almost bipolar impulsive/frozen behavior...)
Anyway, it's a captivating story, very interesting and even fun as the twins go up and down the very dangerous rollercoaster that is their romantic love. Then there's the real fun, like the end of chapter 5 and the nice wind-up for Dipper's plan in six. Keep up the great work.
Anyway, it's a captivating story, very interesting and even fun as the twins go up and down the very dangerous rollercoaster that is their romantic love. Then there's the real fun, like the end of chapter 5 and the nice wind-up for Dipper's plan in six. Keep up the great work.