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You do great work with the characters, especially Candice. Your stories feel like they would be an actual episode if the writers decided to go TV-MA.

Well, you should start posting a new warning with your stories. "Do not read in public, lest you suffer embarrassing arousal." This chapter was even better than the last, and the crazy thing is that Candace telling the truth instead of keeping a secret seems like the kind of thing that actually would work on the show. As always, keep up the amazing work, and update soon :-)
Joma

Excellent! Your latest chapter showed perfectly the feelings of the main three characters. Lonely and heartbroken are two things that change people. I hope that if they do go further, then they show their feelings openly and honestly. That's the only way to make their tri-relationship work and last over time.

You magnificent bastard, that's the second time you've teased us for a sex scene! You realize that now you have to make the actual sex scene ten times more hot because of that, right?

Wait, one of Candace's plans actually worked? Not just worked, but worked in the most wonderful way possible? Call the military! Call the National Guard! Cats and dogs living together! Mass Hysteria!!
But seriously, this chapter couldn't have been more wonderfully crafted, sexy, and downright teasing if it wanted to be. I think I'm safe in saying I wasn't the only one wishing Candace had gone with the "rip their clothing and go hog wild" thought that she had ;-)
Seriously can't wait for your next installment man :-)
Joma

Update soon

I'm glad to see this story finally seeing the light of day! Its a little on the shorter side, but I'm assuming you are going to make up for that later. Also, really glad to see you including Stacy, as she doesn't get nearly as much love from the fan community as she deserves. Great to be reading something new from you, and I can't wait for your next update :)
Joma