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Huzzah! A new chapter! And what did I tell you? If anyone could have done this scene right, it was you. And boy, did you hit it out of the park!
Joma

Very interesting and saucy story, I hope it will get updated soon!

Oh my god, it was Isabella the whole time, that is HILARIOUS! I read this hours ago and I still laugh when I think about it.

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Wow Candace, calling Vanessa a slut? That's not cool... It's probably true, but it's not cool.

Finally, I have been expecting a story focused on this three for quite a long time, and the fact that *you* of all people decided to made one make this even better. The series had a lot of moments between Candance and Stacy, sometimes even more than Candance and Jeremy (Until their pair up, then Stacy is downright tossed aside, such a thing being even explored on a later episode).

I'm curious as to how will you treat the fact that Stacy and Jeremy just barely interact, in fact at some points its almost perceptible that they just tolerate the other just because the know Candance.

Oh, so that's how you're going to take it... I guess that it could be taken that way, that they had been supressing a mutual attraction toward each another simply because they both loved Candance way to much to hurt her like that.

And while Candance plan sounds complicated, it isn't. It's quite simple, what isn't simple is how to hide it from the society and their friends, which is way more harder than anything else. Though, the Tri-State Area seems pretty open minded, they had to be to let children do what they do on that place without that much of a concern.

Lynda on the other hand... well, she's the one that worries me the most. While she's normally a great mother, she might be a problem in the future... but then, she had been show to be quite open minded and might give us a surprise there.

Well, that ascended quickly, I guess that the sexual tension is simply quite too much for them to deal with. Good job on including all of them on the mix, it's a quite well done scene, steamy too.

I do wonder if Stacy will soon discover that Suzie is a control freak when Jeremy is involved?

Also, I'm quite delighted that they show some restraint on the issue, Candance effectively doesn't have any luck, and she had been caught, many times unfairly. So the fact that they're still willing to be together but on a more secure place was a satisfactory change to what I expected to happen. As it goes more with the characters personalities that downright jumping at sex.

I guess that Phineas and other characters wouldn't be used on this story, for it would be quite convenient for Candance to ask for help, which they would gladly offer. THough, I don't see Candance approaching her brothers on the issue, especially as she doesn't want anyone at the moment to know about it.

Also, having them help the trio would take away the tension of being discovered that's always there, just because they aren't Phineas & Ferb.

Oh man, I got a good laught with this interlude, especially as I knew that it would end like that between them... though, I liked once again that they didn't ended up having "phone-sex". As it would have been quite cliché... and it would also add a possible fourth person to this trio.

Laughed out loud with the solar powered dildo... Also, if this is the first interlude, would that mean that there's going to be others? I'm still wondering if you're going to put a antagonist on this story, cof-Suzie-cof... There's simply no chance that the girl wouldn't notice that Jeremy is giving her less attention than before now that he haves *two* girlfriends instead of one.

Geeze, three teaser chapters in a row. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were teasing the hell out of us on purpose. It was very well done however, as always, and I totally agree with Jenny, that Stacy should video and audio record her first complete time with her lovers, for her own (and Jeremy and Candace's) personal use.
Please update soon.
Joma