rate_review Reviews

I'm glad Stacy, Candace and Jeremy handled the breakup situation well, I was really scared that it would result in them going no contact with each other forever. Also the prologue was quite entertaining

Adored the interludes, even if some of them killed the pace and the erotica at some points. Adored the one with Isabella pretending to be a boy giving sexual councels... But also, despite the porn, what I loved the most where the situations and the dialogues that you put all over the story. I guffawed at the part when someone told his child to run from what he believed to be islamist, quite on point on the "Let's respect their culture and run the hell out of here!" You won me there... The fact that you also made Linda aware of WHAT Candace is doing, and also approve it because she's less neurotic thanks to that is downright good. I love it when you made her perceptive but willing to accept or overlook some things so their children could be happy about it. And what I loved the most, was that you explored the poli amori completely, it wasn't just Jeremy boning a suddenly bisexual Candace and Stacy, but also you gave Stacy and Jeremy and Stacy and Candace quite a lot of developing... I love that. It was time for Candace to have a happy ending, she deserves it, in fact I think that she craves for it, which is why she's been so obsessed with busting her brothers who apparently not mattering what she did, won. Thanks for the story, like always... it's quite fun to read ya.

Great story, well written and a very nice idea well executed.
Just a request tho: could we possibly have a couple of bonus chapters, one showing Cadance's anal and one with Phineas and Isabella meeting after he actually climbs to her room after the radio 'man' suggestion. That would be lovely to tying up the last two loose ends.

You know, you are one of those rare authors who has the gift of goldilocks descriptions
Not too much detail that it overshadows the story, not so little that the reader wonders "what the hell is going on?"
Just the right amount of detail to paint a vivid, moving picture in the readers mind.
J.K. Rowling did it, Suzanne Collins did it, and you, good sir, do it every single time. This chapter especially, it was like I was there, not five feet away (as creepy as that sounds)
Oh, and the part at the end? Gold. Pure gold ;-)
Joma

Very nice. I couldn't think of a better way for you to have ended this. (barring another really hot threesome ;-)
Can't wait to see what you do next!
Joma

Well, that's what I call an uncomfortable situation.

Candace's plan is going well so far.

Chapter 4: Jenny is fun, haha.

Chapter 7: Vanessa gives good advice.

Chapter 8: That was close.