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November 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just finished re-reading the story (yet again lol), rather enjoy it. Was wondering what your plans for the future are, if you are going to work on something set during Season 2 as well or maybe do something unconnected.
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August 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
"The weapon was outdated by modern Imperial standards" HA! Maketh Obviously knows nothing about Weapons if she honestly thought that given the fact that DC-15s blaster pistol is a self charging pistol and the DC-17 DC-17m ICWS was the best damn Blaster to come out of the Clone Wars. In comparison to Storm Trooper Blasters which will only hit what your aiming at if your LUCKY.
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July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wanted to say, in case I've not in the past (my memory for commenting is arse). Love the story so far, I was wondering what your plans are for the story after the release of the first episode of the second season.
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May 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just found this series and have been enjoying it very much. Hope to see you bring it to a conclusion. Perhaps having Kallus 'interrogate' Maketh or having her 'reward' Kanan and Ezra after they rescuer her from Tarkin. I could see Maketh enjoy being sandwiched between our two strapping Jedi heroes.
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April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't like how Sabine acts with NO free will please add some of her character back along with free will, maybe reduce usage of master and replace with ezara or husband
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March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
you definitely know how to write sex scenes my friend. that was a fun little orgy, now wasn't it?
Sabine has some major issues to work out it seems, hope Ezra and the others can help her through it. There's something wrong under that pink mando helmet, and me thinks it'll take them all to help her through it.
And finally... the ending... holy crap. I HIGHLY approve.
Great work!
Sabine has some major issues to work out it seems, hope Ezra and the others can help her through it. There's something wrong under that pink mando helmet, and me thinks it'll take them all to help her through it.
And finally... the ending... holy crap. I HIGHLY approve.
Great work!
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March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
to start off, two sex scenes for the price of one, awesome. Hera is officially addictive, and starting to wonder if there's something to Maketh's sex skill that has that effect on people...
very symbolic with how Maketh got pregnant, clearly involving all three of the lovers instead of just two.
Wedding presents, pays to have a rich lover, now doesn't it?
And finally, the best part for me was the wedding itself. EXCELLENTLY done.
Great work my friend!
very symbolic with how Maketh got pregnant, clearly involving all three of the lovers instead of just two.
Wedding presents, pays to have a rich lover, now doesn't it?
And finally, the best part for me was the wedding itself. EXCELLENTLY done.
Great work my friend!
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March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
And so the next chapter has begun...
So, Sabine knocked up Maketh with Ezra's semen huh... rarity but believable. and not surprised she put 2 and 2 together, and the fact the young couple is moving out... I imagine Hera will get some empty nest syndrome.
And looking forward to Maketh's revelation and how Ezra and Sabine will take it.
Great work!
So, Sabine knocked up Maketh with Ezra's semen huh... rarity but believable. and not surprised she put 2 and 2 together, and the fact the young couple is moving out... I imagine Hera will get some empty nest syndrome.
And looking forward to Maketh's revelation and how Ezra and Sabine will take it.
Great work!