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September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WOW what a chapter... I hope Stan is okay (and that he is not a possessed rapist).
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August 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have one word to say about Chapter 4...Ausgezeichnet!
(German for Excellent!)
You wrote the best piece of dual innocence-losing lovemaking I have ever read, and then you topped it off with the best consensual post-innocence-losing three way I have ever read! This is now my favorite chapter of ANY AFF I have ever read (except for my own AFF, of course)!
I don't know how you can top it sexually. But I have a funny feeling you will!
(German for Excellent!)
You wrote the best piece of dual innocence-losing lovemaking I have ever read, and then you topped it off with the best consensual post-innocence-losing three way I have ever read! This is now my favorite chapter of ANY AFF I have ever read (except for my own AFF, of course)!
I don't know how you can top it sexually. But I have a funny feeling you will!
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August 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad this story is back, and with an amazing chapter to boot! Mabel and Dipper were so well in character, they're by far the highlight of the story.
That was quite the ending, though. Those twists hit me so hard, I thought my head was going to pop off! I can't wait to see where you go with this!
That was quite the ending, though. Those twists hit me so hard, I thought my head was going to pop off! I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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August 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story, it was just getting good!
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June 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Marcus B.C. of xXDXGXx here!
Just wondering if you would be interested in possibly featuring on my podcast in the future? if your interested, email me here: xdxgoochx@@gmail.com
Just wondering if you would be interested in possibly featuring on my podcast in the future? if your interested, email me here: xdxgoochx@@gmail.com
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May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You lost me on this chapter man... not as a reader of course. You just made me lose myself on what was going on. I though that I had it, but I clearly didn't. I'm slow clapping to you, man. I'm slowly clapping to you...
Especially because Wendy's scene doesn't make sense, but in the good way. It can be taken in so many ways, she's hallucinating, she can also be dreaming, or she could be actually suffering that at the hands of Stan, or an unknown element. She had asked even if mentally for Stan to rape her, to take her by force if necessary. And that was exactly what happened.
So it might be an stance of be careful of what you wish for... but then there are some clues that this might be psychological or mental attack, Waddles scene gives some credence to the belief that there is a psychic attack involved, which could or not be using Wendy's desires against her...
In the end, damn, there are far too many possibilities to take one... which is again, a certainly good job from your part.
On the other hand... you left us hanging on the Twincest... don't be mean... we want Twincest!!!
Especially because Wendy's scene doesn't make sense, but in the good way. It can be taken in so many ways, she's hallucinating, she can also be dreaming, or she could be actually suffering that at the hands of Stan, or an unknown element. She had asked even if mentally for Stan to rape her, to take her by force if necessary. And that was exactly what happened.
So it might be an stance of be careful of what you wish for... but then there are some clues that this might be psychological or mental attack, Waddles scene gives some credence to the belief that there is a psychic attack involved, which could or not be using Wendy's desires against her...
In the end, damn, there are far too many possibilities to take one... which is again, a certainly good job from your part.
On the other hand... you left us hanging on the Twincest... don't be mean... we want Twincest!!!
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April 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was well written and suspenseful, but I honestly don't know where this story is going at this point, and you can take from that what you will. But whatever happens, I hope that the next chapter doesn't have another weird dream.
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April 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of disgusted of chapter 3 but the story seems pretty good.
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April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A second time reading this and i think I might... still be completely confused.
my guess? some spirit/dream eating/ lustful monster has invaded the dreams and minds of Mabel, Wendy and Pacifica. taking from each something? i imagine the next chapter being about pacifica. and for wendy's "death" just another horrible "dream"
or the magic affected Stan and sent him on a raping spree.
my guess? some spirit/dream eating/ lustful monster has invaded the dreams and minds of Mabel, Wendy and Pacifica. taking from each something? i imagine the next chapter being about pacifica. and for wendy's "death" just another horrible "dream"
or the magic affected Stan and sent him on a raping spree.
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April 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A good new chapter to the story (chapter 3) but I was going "Wha...." by the end. Hope the next chapter will explain what the hell was happening to Wendy.