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May 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice all the way around. Good story, good characterization.
They're, perhaps, a bit too free with swearing, especially fuck, but emotions are running high, so that's offset to a certain degree.
All in all, I look forward to seeing what happens next.
They're, perhaps, a bit too free with swearing, especially fuck, but emotions are running high, so that's offset to a certain degree.
All in all, I look forward to seeing what happens next.