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September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story please continue it as soon as possible
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June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far.
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June 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is amazing! I'm only on chapter 2, but I'm so intrigued! Your grammar is nearly flawless, the plot is amazing, and you're descriptive...This is one of the best MLP fanfics I've read on AFF, no doubt about it. However, I did find one typo; near the middle of chapter 2, when they're getting Twi's gun, it says "Dash tried to take a step back, but Pinks was still holding her." I think you meant Twilight, haha. Great job, though!
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April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was ass and I want that anal and fingering I was promised.
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April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is misleading. I thought was going to be able to pleasure my furiously to this story because the tags were about sex. YOU REACHED ONE OF THEM! Now I have to satisfy my raging by getting intimate with the family and balls deep in that ass. Thank you very!