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February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That sex scene was really intense and awesome! For a minute there when Ben started fire hosing Gwen's ass with cum I thought it might start pouring out of her mouth! Lol.
I I think that there's still time for ben to figure out the switch in the next chapter so I'm going to keep my eye out for that.
I had a feeling that the shooter or forever ninja was west, didn't know why he would do it but I had a feeling it was him.
I hope Ben and Gwen don't stick exclusively to anal and oral sex, I really enjoy conventional sex as well, and it kind of adds to the naughty nature of their relationship they just need to find a magical means of contraception.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter can't wait!
I I think that there's still time for ben to figure out the switch in the next chapter so I'm going to keep my eye out for that.
I had a feeling that the shooter or forever ninja was west, didn't know why he would do it but I had a feeling it was him.
I hope Ben and Gwen don't stick exclusively to anal and oral sex, I really enjoy conventional sex as well, and it kind of adds to the naughty nature of their relationship they just need to find a magical means of contraception.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter can't wait!
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January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking awesome! I think I can kind of see how things are going to go, can't wait to see if I'm right!
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January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and to think i didnt notice this fanfic sooner. Keep it up
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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
very interesting, what are the Knights really after? Are they after Ben? or are they after kai and Mr Green? Or could it be that Mr Green was the forever ninja? So many possibilities.
What on earth could Charmcaster be planning? how could it possibly allow Gwen and Ben to be together openly, I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
I DON'T WANT TO WAIT!
What on earth could Charmcaster be planning? how could it possibly allow Gwen and Ben to be together openly, I guess I'll just have to wait and see.
I DON'T WANT TO WAIT!
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January 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I read chapter 8 & 9 together, both are really awesome!
you did a great job bringing the three of them closer together and the sex was fantastic!
you surprised me by bringing Kai in at the last minute so I can't wait to see how that develops!
you did a great job bringing the three of them closer together and the sex was fantastic!
you surprised me by bringing Kai in at the last minute so I can't wait to see how that develops!
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January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to review chapter 7 before I read chapter 8. chapter 7 was so awesome I read it twice. Enough said! Aside from thank you!
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December 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this was another really great chapter! I love this story, it's like watching the show all over again, but with erotic perks. I'm glad to see you continue, and I hope it never ends!;p
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December 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg i am loving the new direction this is taking great stories both of them the plot between is great and i hope you continue the work
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December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wanted to let you know I read the last three chapters. I think your story is really good so far can't wait to read more.
I also checked out that episode where they were talking about their birthday and they were talking about who would get to celebrate their birthday on the actual day after summer was over so they didn't turn 11 until after the show had ended.
I also checked out that episode where they were talking about their birthday and they were talking about who would get to celebrate their birthday on the actual day after summer was over so they didn't turn 11 until after the show had ended.
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November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I completely understand why Charmcaster does not want to 'be a secret'. The sneaking around I could do, but having to hide my feelings when others were present was heartbreaking. You are continuing a great story!