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I enjoyed this story, wish this site had bookmarks.

I love this story I know it's a long shot, but will we ever see another update 

This is a great story i love it i hope i get to read more chapters

Man, I've been waiting EONS for you to update... I'm so glad that you're back, but also, I'm also sad that things had turned out so ugly there. I guess things aren't always roses and rainbows for them, and something that they did to have some fun ended up as a disaster that nearly got their lives. I'm also quite relieved that you didn't included Kai... I just can't stand her, not really. I'm also a little sad that Ben seems to only value Charmcaster in the emotional sense, while Gwen didn't gave him a bleep. But I guess that Charmcaster and Ben have a much heavier connection between them, with Gwen being a possible add on that's growing on them. And damn... the damnable parents... I guess the angst isn't over yet. Still, thank you for uploading, really.

Yay! Update! Thank you for this story. I enjoy it alot, and not only for naughty parts. :)

Been looking forward to this for a long time, hope this isn't the final chapter since that'd mean no more Gwen/Ben/Charmcaster (I prefer that to Hope) sex.

Good story hope to read more soon.

Quite enjoyable as usual.

I think that Ben's shame and sobbing at having his cock forcibly shoved into a really hot girl seemed forced and unconvincing; the anger and hatred of whoever was manipulating her I can believe but the other stuff just didn't seem to fit Ben's character.

other than that this was a great chapter thanks for posting and I look forward to the next installment.

Sorry for taking so long to give you an review, have been busy nowadays, and now I'm attempting to write my own stories on English, just to see how that goes.

As always, and as I have told you before, I find this story far more enjoyable than its prequel. Which was fantastic, but this one is the cherry of the cake. How funny that I just needed to see an single chapter to suddenly remember the whole story again with almost perfect detail.

It still bother me that such lowlies enemies as that "gang", managed to be so troublesome for the trio, especially Ben who is an powerhouse with the use of the clock. But you later redeem yourself with the late plot of betrayal from Kai... which I'm afraid is the end of the road for the story, as you never updated from that point on on HF.

Still as always, I'll add you one more review, and an +5 for each chapter, because you deserve it. (Actually, deserve an review per chapter... but I'm a lazy git).

Once again, an excellent chapter! Ben gave Gwen the ultimate orgasm, the kind she could easily become addicted to. The only thing that worries me is that now all future orgasms she has will be compared to this one. She may begin to PREFER Ben making love to her in an alien form...

I feel sorry for Ben. I fear he has 'set the bar' so high that nothing he can do, as a human, can come close to equaling this.