rate_review Reviews

Great first chapter. Poor Ben just can't catch a break.

Alright a great Ben 10 story by one of my favorite authors. And thankfully it's 100 times better than that "The Most Dangerous Game Show" that they ran. Seriously they are trying to cram the whole Ben/Kai relationship down our throats. I mean if Chrono Fanboy had not told Ben he would marry Kai he wouldn't even think about dating her. I mean it was so funny with all those alien girls, Charmcaster, Looma, Helen, Lucy as being a love interest with Ben. Now we are stuck with the wantabe Native American Lara Croft (Kai) and I do not have anything wrong with Native Americans its just that Kai falls in the Julie catagory of girlfriends with me. So I'm hoping that either Ester or Charmcaster escapes Gwen's new magic bag (I think she needs a good family moment/peaceful moment) and Ben gets a heck of a Thanksgiving party with them later. I can't wait for it. Sorry for all the contractions I do not mean to be rude. Rook moment Keep up the great work as always and thank you very much! Excelsior!!!