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for Shadows in the night

by selfless1978

schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG poor Leo....gosh i hope they save him. Thanks for updating BTW......I admire Leo's strenght to keep going.
person arma
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey my sweet writer, sorry i have not read your wonderful and amazing new story. But I want to comment and say that i love it. And forever will keep loving your story, as i will be following it as well. I love your ideas and the exiting action in the bio lab building. Well written and understandable, keeps me wanting more. Thanks again. Until your next wonderful chapter.
person ant
schedule November 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is getting exiting, please keep up your wonderful story, i love it and its addicting too. Smiles at you
person ant
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG so exiting...thanks for updating chapter 4....I been waiting, everyday longing on to see if you put up the next chapter. YOur awesome, keep them coming, and thank you for your stories. They give me something to look forward in my life. They really do. Thanks.
person Ant
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awe...it brings me joy to see chapter 3 now.....I wake up every day to see if you posted a new chapter. And when you do, you fill my heart with joy. I love this story. Leo's hidden sexual anger, and Vicky, wow she is strong to forgive him and still love him. I love the new raph too. Strong, and in control. Nice row of the TMNT in adult life. I love it. I can not wait to see who the best is.
person ant
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey Selfless1978.....thanks for updating your story........I was anticipating it would be more better and catching, and it is.