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Whoa, that was crazy what happneded with the crazy fruit.

Can't wait to see what happens with their relationship.

Hey love the plot you created can't wait to see what this place dose to the Ben afraid of using the opnitrix and charmcaster in able to use her powers keep up the great work

So far, so good, liking the story up to this point, scenarios nicely described and a rather coherent story flow. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Great story read on Hentai Fondry and been reading it's sequel. Their both great stories.

Ah, well. I was hoping for more of a 'Swept Away' story. Kinda boring so far.

It had been a while since I saw this Story, but I still like how you developed each character, especially how they interact with each another. I now remember what will happen next, and where does this story leads. But it still doesn't meant that this is actually quite a well done story.

I give you a review, cause it will also probably increase your readers. As, let's face it. People are quite superficial and if they see many visits, but not that many reviews and votes. They mostly considere the story bad. Which isn't the case here.

Good look, man.

Ben needs to put this bitch in her place. Hope he doms her.

Uh? You have an account here too? What a surprise... But, why are you publishing it here again? What kind of problems did you have in the other page?

Intersting story. But maybe teenage Ben would have worked better. Update soon and I hope the action starts.