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June 23, 2023 at 12:00 AM
Funny, sexy and deep. Most excellent.
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June 4, 2020 at 12:00 AM
I like the story behind this First and formost.
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November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing from beginning to end and I'll tell you that this is a great story, it had a great plot, great sex and a good ending, now if Charmcaster brought some of those seeds back with her she could share them with Ben and Gwen and have an awesome threesome! by the way just so you know Ben and Gwen are both 10 years old in the original Ben 10 story.
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November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Reading these reviews make me smile, nobody know that this had been on HF for years before the new policy. Nice that people like the story though.
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October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed chap. 5; very sexy. Since you are going the romantic route I hope it works out for them.
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 5, I'm VERY pleased with how that one turned out, a lot better than what happened in chapter 4. This one felt really good and is an excellent cornerstone in the longrun.
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October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was disappointed that when the actual intimate moment came, it was with a transformation right off the bat. Other than that, it was well written up to that point.
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October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, hope Charmcaster gives him a nice forceful milking in the middle of the night.
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October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow the island seems to have a mind of its own Ben had to save her from a copy of himself and have to deal with the reality that they need each other to survive live it just love it keep them coming
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October 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
People who talk in there dreams sometimes is because they are trouble by somthing others just move back and forward that being said our body begins to give to our subconscious we may denie stuff but our subconscious is always there reming us of who we are as for charmcaster there is simething that will not let her be herself Ben will just have to figure out what is it keep up the great work