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April 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! The climax of this story was much more satisfactory than in part 1! :)Again, the writing was terrific.
I love stories like these -- little vignettes and interstitial events that happen in between the scenes of a larger story. Filling in the gaps is fun and makes for great stories.
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November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this story. That last line though. Ouch. Now I feel bad for Bolin.
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September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an even better story with the best ending and every bit as well written as the first story!
Looking forward to the next sequel! :)
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Looking forward to the next sequel! :)
You might enjoy checking out some of my stories