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February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I'm looking forward to Mako feeling like a pile of crap when he learns the truth.
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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that this story is very good as far as the plot and direction. However the grammar needs some tweaking, I noticed plot holes here and there, and I noticed once Korra's new allies referred to her as Korra, instead of her false name. Please take this as constructive criticism from a fellow writer, and keep up the good work!!
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December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story - Keep up the good work! It's pretty nice to read a story that actually has a plot on a site like this.
10/10
10/10