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Suzy the little malicious yandere got clapped hard by Candace and her brothers. That's what she gets for messing with Candace over Jeremy

It's a wonderful story, with a nice view into the disturbing darkness that fills little Suzy Johnson almost as much as she wants Jeremy to fill her. The introduction was actually quite touching, with how much she loves the thunderstorms and why, besides just being a way to get into Jeremy's bed.

The clueless boy is sweet all the way through, and nice that he's a deep sleeper so we could get the first great bit of sex – with her reactions to it being no less delightful. Then it was delicious to tap into the various fantasies Suzy harbored. And I must say, her combination of evil and lust proved quite delectable as she trapped Candace and tore away every shred of her will and dignity. (Or so she thought. :))

The whole trap played out like something we'd expect, even if a bit more intense than an actual episode would ever be. I definitely felt the redhead's utter defeat when I read it, and the beastie scenes were (appropriate) more painful than erotic, but definitely enough of the latter to be quite good. Of course I was half-expecting a turnaround at the end, but I wasn't at all sure this wouldn't be a Betty Davis movie (where the bad woman always somehow wins anyway). Then when I heard Candace's phone barking... Well, I knew the gig was up, and that she could rely on her brothers to save her when she really needed it. The only thing that gave me pause was Suzy saying how Candace couldn't control her brothers – perhaps Suzy knew about the busting thing but didn't realize that the boys often do things for Candace. (They just don't work out as planned.) It's easy to go with the "Suzy was grasping at anything to rationalize herself out of defeat" thing, yes, because I'm thinking more as the viewer than as what Suzy would see. Okay. :)

So I really enjoyed the tale and especially Candace's victorious ending. Now go put on some pants. ;)

I loved it all I really want to see what happens next.

I don't really want to see a sequel where Suzy wins.But I do want to see what the dogs did to make her scream.

Well, thank you sir. My heart was skipping the whole chapter, pondering if Suzy would win... and wow, you surprised me in such a way that even I couldn't predict what you had in mind! Candace was masterfully done. She is indeed a marvelous actress as not even the readers could see that until the end. I guess, we have been understimating the girl.

Slow clapping to you, man. Slow clapping as I liked this quite a lot!

Shame we never saw Suzy's humiliattion, and of course, hoping the dogs don't pay the price later for putting her on her rightful place.

Well. Well well well.
I mean holy hot damn! It must be Christmas morning and nobody told me! You have once again out done both yourself and the show, mr. Glass, and I happily remove the brand of sadistic ass from you, and instead bestow the title, best smut writer ever. Of all time. To finally have the faux Goldie Locks get punished the way she deserves has easily made this story one of my favorites from you. The fact that Candace used the one thing Suzy could never fathom to beat the little blonde bitch is very wholly satisfying, and the fact that she had every base covered made it all the better. The only thing that could have made this better was if you had written Suzy's rape, or at the very least written some of the things her former troops were doing to make her scream. And then, as its happening, Candace rushes up to Jeremy's room, and begins getting it on with him to make sure that Jeremy doesn't hear his little creeper getting her comuppance. But it's ok, that's what imagination is for ;)
And you have used yours very well, George. I thank you again for writing it, and I'm looking forward to reading it again and again, just as I have for many of your works.
I honestly can't wait to see what you do next!
Again, good work, and glad to see your hiatus didn't rob you of your immense talent.
Your fan and friend,
Jomahawk2694

Man, while it's a dark story, a huge, big part of me doesn't want Suzie to win, at all. In fact, after what she did, I want her to be totally and utterly defeated. Jeremy had been the obcession of Candance for far too long, and Phineas & Ferb know their sister way better than her own parents. Such a change wouldn't be noticeable at first, but they will notice.

And while Phineas optimism is his mark, he had shown that he could be snarky and devious when he wants. Ferb who has been shown to be even much more mature would surely notice such a thing, and let's not begin with Perry. Who will never forgive that dog for what he did to a member of his family.

If Suzie wins, I beg of you. Make an sequel when she is slowly and deliberately taken down, not only by P&F, but Candance herself.

Please man, as a faithful reader of yours, make that bitch pay, if not in the third part, then on an Oneshot sequel.

oh my...you sir....

Okay, first and foremost; you are a sadistic ass! (And I mean that as the highest form of compliment ;-) )
Secondly, remember the first couple of reviews I wrote for you? The ones saying that your stories were so true to the show that it seemed like a script that came from a P&F writer who had watched a few too many pornos? I find it a bit scary that if the show were a rated x adults only, instead of the awesome kids show it is, this is how I assume Suzy would act. Your talent is quite good, even when applied to the dark side such as the little blonde spawn of Satan of the tri-state area. Finally, on another, less creepy note, I never thought I would actually learn something educational from reading your stories. Naming her dog Bella after a lethal herb and not a...blemish on vampire lore, was quite the expert touch :)
I simply can't wait for the conclusion! So please do us a favor and make it snappy!
Your favorite fan
Jomahawk

wow that is one twisted little kid!

good story!