Reviews for The Time Machine! - Cartoons

person JoiKuf

schedule September 21, 2023 at 12:00 AM

A fun read, sadly stopped at Season 2, Episode 1.

person Anon

schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Did gumball blow up the school?

person Timmy

schedule August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM

this is a cool story man don't stop writing it , can't wait for season 2.

person Corinthios

schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Great story, love the references.

person Hank

schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Man this story is fucking awesome! Wonder what Nicole is gonna do, imagine if gumball went back to his own time and his mom remembered they had sex! Oh man that would be fucking hilarious

person Hank

schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Great story, I'd really like to see where goes from here. I'm suprised about how in depth the story is already. Keep working on this story, trust me it's already very popular. Usually fanficton authors get to bored with this shit to easily, but fuck em' I like this story so keep working on it.

person milanor

schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM

exelent story very funny and interesting i hope to read more soon

person Belfry

schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM

This story has a good start. Good story about his mother, being a sexual vamp at such a young age. It always throws children for a loop when their prim, proper, loving parent is just as, if not more, sexual than they are!

person AFFModerator

schedule July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer.

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person Anon

schedule July 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM

He probably will fuck his Mother when she was a lil girl

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