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by xXDasXGoochXx

person SWK
schedule May 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good to have you back! And let me tell you, so far. This one was the best... It seemed that your forced Hiatus (believe me, I know how life and circumstance can gang-bang you)... And well, would it be Darwin who would spy them? Or would it be Nicole, who had heard then retreat and went to check up on them? I don't have a problem with Darwin, but I'm no fan of including him on the sex scenes. But once again, this short stories are yours.

schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
xXDasXGoochXx, yesterday you reviewed my story "Fistbump" (Gravity Falls). I am going to delete your review tomorrow: if you want, please post a new one without the spoiler of the sad ending. Thanks.

Edward_or_Ford
person SWK
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You left me wondering who was that cousin of his, and what happened over there to change Gumball so much. I'm also surprised that he hasn't attempted to fuck Nicole, or some of the mothers from his friends, like Rachel Mom, or Penny's Mom.
person PyTerato
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was adorable. I feel a little dirty for finding it cute, but there you have it. It was the last entry I read with the poor claustrophobic banana. You write well and there's a light, humorous charm to your style. If you ever decide to try your hand at original fiction, I'd like to see what you come up with.

~Clover~
person SWK
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Some of the stories are... unusual. I admit that, but strangely... alluring in a sense. The one I enjoyed the most was the last one with Anais.