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April 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Give me!A sequel! Give me! A sequel! Give me! A sequel!
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November 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
...What the hell did I just read.
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October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
Mabel finally got what she wanted.
Mabel finally got what she wanted.
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October 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The best part was Wendy and Tambry.
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I FINALLY got a chance to read this, and it was well worth the wait. I loved the running jokes (cake, "wash the pig"), and you write marvelous Mabel-speak; I especially liked "ostrichsized" and her phonetic spelling of "hieroglyphics." And her taunting of Gideon was great. (Frankly, if I heard her describe that Dipper-sex scenario the way she does in the story, even _I_ would be thinking, "Gosh, when she puts it that way, I think I WOULD like to fuck Dipper in the ass.")
I'm curious, though; does "QQQ" signify anything in particular, or was that just Mabel being her unique self?
I was momentarily confused when Wendy told Stan that she was having "women problems"; for a second, I thought she was admitting to the seemingly torrid affair described at the beginning of the story. Given that she's talking to--and trying to fool--an old man, I'd think she would choose an old-fashioned expression, like "female troubles."
Other favorite bits: "Calculating Route," "happy tunnel" (that's a new one on me, and as a fellow writer of...whatever you call this, I'm always glad to have another vagina metaphor in the armamentarium), the significance of Stan's fez, and the completely well-reasoned rationale for the ending. Which, BTW, was very satisfying.
IMO, you're two for two on Gravity Falls stories. May the goddess Bastet smile upon you. :)
(There's a pun about "yarn" and "yarns" in there somewhere, but I can't quite make it come together.)
I'm curious, though; does "QQQ" signify anything in particular, or was that just Mabel being her unique self?
I was momentarily confused when Wendy told Stan that she was having "women problems"; for a second, I thought she was admitting to the seemingly torrid affair described at the beginning of the story. Given that she's talking to--and trying to fool--an old man, I'd think she would choose an old-fashioned expression, like "female troubles."
Other favorite bits: "Calculating Route," "happy tunnel" (that's a new one on me, and as a fellow writer of...whatever you call this, I'm always glad to have another vagina metaphor in the armamentarium), the significance of Stan's fez, and the completely well-reasoned rationale for the ending. Which, BTW, was very satisfying.
IMO, you're two for two on Gravity Falls stories. May the goddess Bastet smile upon you. :)
(There's a pun about "yarn" and "yarns" in there somewhere, but I can't quite make it come together.)
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May 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sexy! I loved it!