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Ok, I really enjoyed the story, and seeing as it's been several years since was updated, or you have even put up anything new on this site, will you write anything more? I'd love  to read a sequel series following the progress of their relationship (sexual and otherwise). Even find out about what happens when their family finds out, do they pretend to date others to hide it? If so, does their lack of real interest in fake partners bring questions about sexuality from family/partner?  I'd really like see it explored further 

I find myself really enjoying this story. It's good that there are still some people who can write erotica with plot.

What's Bens size?

Very entertaining, though you did leave out the most thrilling part, unless they never did go "ALL" the way.

Great story, hope to see more like it for other characters if you ever get the chance.

Can't wait to see what's next! this is a lot of fun.

For the love of god(or your applicable religious figure of choice), more!

Well, at least the pace had increased to an bearable extent. A little rushed in the end. It might have been better to let them explore a little, before they jumped to the "I love you, yes I do." I still mantain my earlier reviews, you should have joined some chapters, to make the pace of the story more bereable to the readers, especially those that are simply searching for smut. Some obviously wouldn't like the slow pace, much less that you're reaching six to seven chapters and the smut is barely beginning. Remember that not many have patience, so joining the first three chapters might made the story less stressful. And put a more stable and tolerable pace on it.

I'lry I forgot to write a review for this chapter, I just got a little distracted. I love this chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapter hope you post it soon! I decided to try to help you out a little so I'm working on a beta for this last chapter. I'll either posted it as a review or send you a PM on the forum when I'm done.

That was good, we're making progressI I can't wait for the next chapter. you should however, know that there are a ton of grammatical errors in your writing. You use the word on when you should be using the word in and in the last paragraph, it should have been the door that led to the underground passage or garden or whatever it was.