AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Luck Before You Sleep

by Demon_Casket

person Talveran
schedule May 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I feel like we're missing a chapter between 1 and 2, because chapter 1 ends with Rarity challenging Luna to Truth or Dare, and chapter 2 opens with Rainbow Dash being eaten out by Spike....

person Kojoe92
schedule December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OhmahgoshOhmahgoshOhmahgosh!!! I am so loving this story and I am so glad that you added another chapter, now I can't wait for the next. Please please please keep writing this story! Do Not Let This DIE!!!
person superlink
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i hope theres gonna be more luna
person superlink
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i liked the way you set the scene for the next chapter im greatly looking forward to the next one. Also i was wondering if you were gonna have the girls take a trip to equestria because i would love to see that anyway keep up the great work sugarcube.
person superlink
schedule March 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another great story im hoping rarity will get some action in the next chapter or soon,anyway keep up the good work sugarcube
person superlink
schedule March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter keep up the good work
person superlink
schedule March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
it's very good i have been waiting for a story like this for a while i can't wait to read the next chapter
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was interested until you went to Equestria Girls...