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for When fire and earth mixes

by Fanfictionfan360

schedule January 16, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I honestly never considered this ship before. I like it. :-3

mainly because it's you writing it XD

that was hot as fuck, and so like toph to be naked while she tells all the other gold diggers to get lost XD

 

on a separate note, the fact that an assassin almost killed Zuko is quite concerning, and I have this horrible feeling that there will be more coming to claim the price on his head :-(

At least he has a bad ass for a wife now XD

IBTS

schedule October 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved this one :D Toph is my favorite character here and you wrote her amazingly. Zuko was also pretty entertaining here. Awesome job and keep up the good work!

person Flavor
schedule April 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome, I'd like to see more
schedule February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, interesting story. If you're gonna do any more Avatar STories, I wouldn't be against it. Please keep up the good work.
person Locke Lamora
schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I've read all of your Code Lyoko stories, on fanfiction.net (Before they took them down), and on here, in addition to a lot of your other stories, and your writing is the best I've seen. I always look forward to your next story. Anyways, back to this one, it's a great story with little or no grammatical errors. It's decent writing, and it keeps the writer intrigued enough to continue. It's funny as well. Out of all your stories, this of one that you left open for a second chapter, whether you intended to or not, that's what I think. Feel free to send me an email if you object or feel strongly about any of this.