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January 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was pretty good. I didn't think the characters were as faithful to the story as they could have been, but they certainly didn't clash with the original. I loved the spanking and the sex scenes were great. Loved it!
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February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello, and Thank You!!! These (currently) 7 chps have consumed me so much over this last month or so. I've just re-read it again for like the 4th or 5th time.
Yes, I could harp on the odd spelling or syntax error. Perhaps instead comment on how a certain chp could have been adjusted Because of how your characters` dialogue flowed. Overall? This is a VERY Fine story! You have a vision.... and that vision has made me Need to rub more than a couple out!! #4 fits perfectly, and yes, Zuko is so Very dead IF Katara finds out!! #5 I think little Song didn't learn enough about what Discipline truly is. and #7, the final pause before we see Song decend (and climb) to what might be many new limits and vistas as she finds a place for herself in palace-life.
Again, THANK YOU! I look so forward to what you have in mind.
Yes, I could harp on the odd spelling or syntax error. Perhaps instead comment on how a certain chp could have been adjusted Because of how your characters` dialogue flowed. Overall? This is a VERY Fine story! You have a vision.... and that vision has made me Need to rub more than a couple out!! #4 fits perfectly, and yes, Zuko is so Very dead IF Katara finds out!! #5 I think little Song didn't learn enough about what Discipline truly is. and #7, the final pause before we see Song decend (and climb) to what might be many new limits and vistas as she finds a place for herself in palace-life.
Again, THANK YOU! I look so forward to what you have in mind.
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January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice, looking forward to the fallout.