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for Transformers Prime Evolution

by ZeroRestraints

person Saisaici
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Im not a big fan of Yaoi, but i like you story.



Jack - - - MODES --- Triple Changers --- Car - Helicopter -

June - MODES - ambulance emergency response vehicle - EXTRA - scalpel -

Miko - MODES - Jet Plane - armor car - EXTRA - Echolocation

Rafael - MODES - compact hightech car - ATV

Sierra - MODES - Bike

Vince - MODES - armored SWAT trucks - Commando Select

Spike - MODES - fire truck

Carly - MODES - car

Sari - MODES - spy plane

Mikaela - MODES - armored truck

weapon ide - Enegon Bow

you like?
person lordnikon
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is the greatest story ever written please keep it going for as long as possible
person Kael
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think you messed up bringing back Cliff Jumper plus only a Prime can use the Forge of Solus Prime.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i say miko should be a tank
person Geoff
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I say make Jack a triple changer.
person sean
schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not sure about the others but it would be cool if jack could be like springer from gen1(ok I know tec. Gen2 but still) helacopter and car or jeep might be cooler. Oh p.s. peacekeeper for a name just something I thought would be a name for him as a bot. Just a thought a scene were arcee finds out Airachnid gave jack blowjob for funny moment. Like I said just a thought. Email with your thoughts. P.p.s.s. awsome story man
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
dude, this is one of the best TF fics ever. u did amazing. i was a little disappointed with the lack of sex but it was still awesome. u gotta make it that jack gets with all them femmes :) with the setting u have for the next chapter that shouldn't be hard.

cant wait for what arcee thinks of the new jack
person Arbyz
schedule December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see this fic come back after it was possibly(?) purged from FF.net, so I wonder if you plan on putting up the next chapter soon.

I wouldn't do much for voting because the reader base here doesn't seem that big, and it's not very vocal. I think you had(?) plans back when it was up but I'm not sure.

While I won't like some parts, I still enjoy the rest, so carry on!
schedule December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is some high level bad ass can't wait for the next part