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December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, after reading the cleaned up version of this, I got quite a laugh out of it.
It still had a fair few spelling flaws and misused words, but it was still very fun and again kept with the theme of the characters.
It still had a fair few spelling flaws and misused words, but it was still very fun and again kept with the theme of the characters.
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really funny, you should write another chapter, it's an interesting one-shot that could very well be the start of a good story, maybe only 3-4 chapters but still... regardless of what you do, it's a good story and a better laugh.